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    October 28

    《漫长ing》

    《漫长ing》
     
    1095天   学习成果
    33天       一次验收
    四大主科华国英数
    还有地理历史科学
    生活技能也来捣乱
     
    33天      漫长ing
    空气密度瞬间变大
    差点忘了如何适应
     
    33天      漫长ing
    高高大楼呼唤着我
    慢慢将他一一啃光
     
    24小时   反复交替
    33天      终于离去
    四大情趣喜怒哀乐
    还有呼吸睡眠食欲
    心中大石回归于心
     
    卸下重重的武装 
    却找不回原来的
    支撑点
     
    这是我在考试期间创作的，可能压力的关系吧！^哈^
    就这样创作了这首诗
    你们慢慢看吧。。
    3:05 PM | Blog it | 我的涂鸦天地

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    chai chenwrote:
    拜托！在称赞你好吗？！
    谁规定一定要针对主体留言呢？
    去看看颖欣的blog就能发现他们根本把留言当成msn咯
    哈哈！
    Nov. 6
    Zexi Limwrote:
    ==妙真根本就不针对主题留言吗！
    我说诗真的很难写得好！
    Nov. 5
    Bettywrote:
    是吖
    写作的路非常漫长
    要加很多油才能闯出一片天
    不过我只是把写诗当成一种休闲方式
    抒发一下情趣
    谢谢泽希德鼓励哦
    Nov. 5
    chai chenwrote:
    wow...泽希有大师的感觉
    哈！
    Oct. 28
    Zexi Limwrote:
    加油咯，创作要加很多油，不断看不断改才会进步=）
    Oct. 28

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